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2010年考研作文范文之安慰信

  实用宝典:2010年考研初试应考注意事项   ·2010年考研英语写作热点话题预测及示例  ·新东方在线2010年考研公共课最后模拟题安慰信You heard that one of your friends failed in the e

  ·实用宝典:2010年考研初试应考注意事项   ·2010年考研英语写作热点话题预测及示例   ·新东方在线2010年考研公共课最后模拟题

安慰信You heard that one of your friends failed in the entrance examination of postgraduate. Write a letter to him which should include the following information:1.Express your regrets2.Encourage him to try again3.Hope to see him in high spirits.You should write about 100 words.

Dear Jennifer,

称呼:写作关系亲密的个人

I am very sorry to hear that you didn’t pass your exam. I know how difficult the past few weeks have been for you. I have thought about this for a long time and I decide to express my regrets in this way.
第一段点明写作目的:为了安慰朋友没有通过考试。第一句话开门见山拟安慰事宜。(积累:I am sorry to hear that…)第二句话表达写信人感同身受。

第三句话是一个and连接的并列复合句,强调写信人写这封信的原因。(积累:express my regrets)

You are a very smart person as well as an industrious student. If it were not for your cold, you would have been admitted by Qinghua University. I think you should try one more time next year. I am sure that you will be successful. However, you should pay attention to your health. You should do some exercises after studying for a period of time.
第二段从考试失败的客观原因及建议两方面展开。第一、二句先肯定收信人的实力,然后强调了考试失败的客观原因----感冒。(积累: as well as; be admitted by)

第三、四句提出写信人的第一条建议:再坚持考一年(积累:try one more time)

第五、六句提出写信人的第二条建议:注意身体健康。(积累:do some exercises)
I hope you will be in high spirits when I see you next time.

第三段是一个复合句,表达了写信人的祝福和期待。(积累:in high spirits)

Best wishes, Li Ming信件结尾和署名

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